Ask A Broadsheet Reader

Bodger at 2:42 pm July 11, 2018

Is it just me or is the first line of this government ad in need of a good rewrite?

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8 thoughts on “Ask A Broadsheet Reader”

Andyourpointiswhatexactly? July 11, 2018 at 2:50 pm

YOU’RE unbelievable, Ken Fox.
1. Andyourpointiswhatexactly? July 11, 2018 at 2:50 pm
  
  wiv an E.
Ciaran July 11, 2018 at 3:47 pm

I wonder what Simon Pegg sent Oprah Winfrey to make her smile?
1. Rob_G July 11, 2018 at 3:51 pm
  
  V. good :)
Starina July 11, 2018 at 4:18 pm

semi-colon, please.
Conski July 11, 2018 at 4:29 pm

Is it a touch mansplainy? or is my fauxrage out of kilter?
Ken Foxe July 11, 2018 at 5:29 pm

This was the bit of the MerrionStreet tweet which I found confusing: “If a website you don’t know has a deal too good to be true, it’s usually because it is.” Hadn’t noticed the mansplainy bit: https://twitter.com/merrionstreet/status/1016974906246955008
Cian July 11, 2018 at 5:42 pm

I’m missing something. what is the issue with this?

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